15.

One Possible Version

Dear friends,

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. I’m 14 years old. I live in Ya’an. I’m interested in drawing. In my  free time, I often go  camping, draw some  pictures  of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. My favourite subject is Science. I want to be a

scientist when I grow up.

I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.

That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的发言稿文。结合材料，可知本文要爱好，课外活动，理想方面进行介绍，并注意表达自己希望参加夏令营的愿望。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

16.

书面表达参考范文(一)：

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

书面表达参考范文(二)：

Learn to express thanks

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.

As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help.

In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇关于感恩的演讲稿。写作中注意将材料按照材料提示进行介绍，通过材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意使用连接词，做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。由于是演讲类作文，尤其注意应用一些常见句式、短语来提高我们的表达水平。

17.

Dear John,

It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it?

I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I' m sure he'll be very happy.

What's your plan for Father's Day? I' m looking forward to hearing from yon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，介绍如何与父亲一起度过父亲节。材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合材料可知本文主要用一般将来时态进行叙述，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

18.

School Rules

Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some  of  our school rules. Let me tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，向一位新生Mary介绍学校的规章制度。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。为了使语言更显亲切,在写作时，本文的主语主要是用复数第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时态. 注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯,适当使用连词。

考点：说明文写作

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

19.

It was October 12th yesterday. My friends held a birthday party for me. In the morning, they came to my home early, and they brought many presents for me. I liked them very much. I invited them to the KTV, we sang songs, danced and played games. About 5:30 p.m., we went my home. My mother had cooked a delicious dinner for us. After dinner, we watched TV and at about 8:30 p.m. we ate birthday cake.  There were fifteen candles on my birthday cake. I made a silent wish, and then I blew the candles out in one breath. I had an interesting birthday party. We had a good time in the party. I was so grateful to what they did for me.

【解析】

试题分析;这是一篇给材料作文，介绍奶奶的生日。动笔前先要先认真阅读提示单词，根据单词组织材料，确定写作内容。根据提示可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第一人称复数。句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。

考点：记述文写作

点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。

20.One possible version:

My dear friends,

Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.

However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.

Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!

【解析】首先我们应该注意文章的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式。其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态。再次要注意内容要点，不要有漏啦。最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力。

21.

We will pay a visit to the old people’s home this Sunday. We’ll have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Before we leave, we’ll give our presents to them.

I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.

【解析】

本题要求根据所给表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一个通知，将学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动的活动安排告知全班同学。本题给出大量的信息，包括活动时间、集合时间、出发时间以及返回时间;集合地点、活动地点;活动内容，及交通方式，注意将这些内容介绍清楚。写作中注意用词准确，逻辑清楚，并注意应用文题的格式，要求。

22.one possible version：

Life in the future：for better or worse?

Many students are optimistic(乐观的)about the next fifty years.In fact，they think

that the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly improved.

As a result，people will have a higher standard of living and live longer.

However，other students are worried about the future.They say the world will

become more crowded.Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and

live in a world with less energy available.

But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will

live more happily.

【解析】本文属于议论文，主体时态为一般现在时。写作时要用正确的句式表达出乐观者和担心者的观点，最后用自己的观点结束全文。

23.

On my last holiday went to Hawaii.My classmates LiZhi wei,QinChangping and I.First day,went to the beach took a bus.The QinChangping pulled out to a stong American and he won.The LZhiwei played  volleyball with two beautiful American girl but he lost.I swam with six sporsmans.My sawm was the best.

Next day.We saw a film in a big cinema.We had lunch in a big hotel and ate lots of shashliks.There shashilks were very nice.Afternoon ,we went to graeyard of  ZhangXue liang ,and took lots of photos.

Third day.We stayed 5 hours in the beach.We played bolleyball with seven beautiful American girls.there  were only us there boys ,so we won to the girls.Afternoon ,we bought many books of ZhangXueliang in there.The books were very nice.I am  going to send  my friends.

Next we took a plane to Beijing .I love Hawaii.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的最后一个假期。本题所给材料比较简单，动词前先要阅读所给六个问题,对涉及问题都要有所回应。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,注意应用所给单词，短语。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

24.

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.  First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.

In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

25.

I have a new friend .Her name is Tina Green. Her age is 14 years old .Her nationality is English. She is in the first high school .Her lunch is the tomato、 chicken and fruit. Her collection is 9 baseballs and 4 volleyball. She likes playing baseballs and volleyball. We are good friends.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇短文，介绍自己的新朋友。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第三人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。

26.One possible version:

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

【解析】本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

27.

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He lost his arms in an

accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in "China’s Got Talent".

As a student, I’ve learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍无臂钢琴演奏者刘伟的短文。本题给出的材料较为详细，写作中首先要描述一下刘伟的经历，然后谈谈自己受到的启示。通过阅读材料可知在叙述刘伟的经历部分主要用一般过去时态，在表达自己感想时可用一般现在时态及将来时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

28.

Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in computer, hopes to learn how to use the computer after the exam. Then she can do many things on computer. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. I’m sure I’ll be happy when I help them.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料非常详细，分别介绍两个人的想法。写作中注意将两个人的想法表达清楚。注意应用所给单词短语。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文时态主要是一般现在及将来时态，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

【答案】One possible version:

My Dream

I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.

I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them.

【解析】首先审题：写自己的梦想。其次：注意写作要点中要陈述两条理由和实现梦想的三种方式。最后注意结束语。

30.

One possible version:

Whitecloud: I come from China k.Com] . I’m also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached. What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we’d better keep our voice

down . I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I’m sure we Chinese will  show our best to the whole world!

Sincerely yours,

【解析】本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

31.

Some students thought that E-Books are good for environment. They can save plenty of paper. So people needn’t cut down too many trees. E-books are also very nice and small. And they are easy to carry .people can search for information conveniently. They can be read in the environment without light.

But some students disagreed with them. They thought if they use them for a long time, they are bad for their eyes. While having classes, students can’t make notes directly in the books. Sometimes, they can be played by students .I think E-books will be replaced the traditional books in the future. I am looking forward to the day.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇关于推广电子书包议论文。要求中已经给出了主要要点比较简略，写作中注意根据要点组织内容，从正反两方面介绍人们赞成或者反对的观点。动笔前先要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。

32.略

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述各方观点的议论文作文，主题是讨论家庭作业的必要性。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容，注意表达自己的观点。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

Dear Class,

It is our turn to report.

That’s all. Thanks.

33.One possible version:

Our school Drama Club is holding a film activity. We saw Life of Pi last week. It is directed by Ang Lee. And he gets the Best Director Award for it. The film is about the story of a young man called Pi. He takes a boat trip alone. He not only has to deal with difficult weather conditions but also needs to find enough food for himself. And at last he comes back home safely.

Many people think Life of Pi is one of the year’s best films. It tells us we should brave enough to face any problem and find ways to solve them. We are heroes of ourselves.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你在看了李安执导的电影《少年派》的感想。在写作此类作文时，首先要将电脑内容进行简单介绍，然后在针对某个问题发表自己的感想。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一三人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。

34.略

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇文章介绍了学生们生活的变化。本题以表格形式给出了主要写作内容，写作中注意将学生们过去和现在的生活介绍清楚，病发表自己的看法。故动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，根据材料内容确定人称，时态等问题。结合材料可知本文可能涉及过去，现在和将来三种时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

35.

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. In my opinion, both air travel and train travel have advantages and disadvantages.

Travelling by air can save much time. For example, if you fly from Qingdao to Guangzhou, it takes only two hours. If you take the train, you will not get to Guangzhou in 23 hours. Also, air travel is more comfortable. The train is usually crowded and you have to sit on your seat for a long time. You will get tired after the long travel. On the other hand, train travel also has its advantages. First, it costs only 550 yuan while travelling by air costs 1200 yuan. What’s more, you can enjoy the beautiful countryside views outside the window along the way.

Which would you prefer? I am afraid you have to make your own choice. If you need more information, please let me know.

Have a nice journey!

Yours

Xiao Li

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈两种交通方式的利弊。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

总结：初三英语竞赛试题就为大家分享到这里了，同学们只要努力学习，积极动手，勤于动脑，多总结，善发现，一定会取得较好的成绩。

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