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2013-08-26
关于暑假生活英语作文:My summer vacation的思路清晰,文采非凡。生动形象的描写了远离城市喧嚣的乡村美景。
My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable. I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays. It is very beautiful there. There are green plants, clear rivers, lovely animals kind people. I spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there. I wrote down what happened in my diary every day.Besides that, I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. I helped them read English improve their spoken English. Their parents thanked me for this.
关于暑假生活英语作文:My summer vacation的单词短语句型运用准确,但仍有一处不足之处。文章本应以一般过去时为时态,但在谈论到乡村美丽风景时,使用了一般现在时,有待商榷。
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