如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 --- 提出建议 --- 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。

3. 语法、亮点

根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。

One possible version:

Hi! Alice,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.

I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.

I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours, Liu Ming

(2011四川宜宾) 第三节：书面表达。(共1题，计12分)

健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

(1)、保持健康的重要性;

(2)、保持健康的方法：.多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;再睡早起;勤洗手;

(3)、自己的看法(至少一条)。

注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词;

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

_________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

One possible version

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

【2011•四川南充】第三节 书面表达

假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望你知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：

1.他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等;

2.感谢的理由。

要求：1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥;

2.语句通顺、意思连贯;

3.字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内;