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具体评分细则
Section 1V Writing
(40 minutes)
You should write your responses to both Part A and Part B of this section on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Part A
66. You have read the following magazine advertisement in which a British girl is looking for pen-friends and you want to get in touch with her.
Name : Helen Young
Age: 21
Interest: collecting coins, stamps and postcards; learning different languages.
All letters will be answered.
Address : 42 Johnson Street, Edinburgh, EH9 1LN, UK
Write a letter to her (Helen Young), telling her about:
1. your family
2. your schooling or work
3. your hobbies
You should write approximately 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Use "Wang Lit" instead. You do not need to write the address.
part B
67. Below is a graph showing the distribution of car accidents in a city during 1997. Look at the graph and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following points :
1. the distribution of car accidents in different months and the general trend in 1997
2. the possible reasons for the distribution of car accidents in the city
The number of car accidents:
A节
内容 给笔友的信应提供有关家庭、个人学习或工作及兴趣爱好的具体信息。信中也应表达交友的愿望。具体书信内容不限，可保留个人风格。
多样性使用记叙性语言。使用与主题有关的词汇。
连贯性采用恰当的衔接手法，内容连贯。恰当的开头和结束语。
格式与语域私人书信格式。在信的结尾处，考生不得署真实姓名，必须按照给出的姓名署名。
目标读者 可以对笔友的生活有所了解。
B节
内容 文章应首先对l997年交通事故的全年分布及趋势做一概括的描述，然后阐述事故分布的可能原因。具体原因不作限制，只要言之成理，均可得分。
多样性 使用说明性、议论性的语言，应用与主题有关的词汇。
连贯性 按逻辑顺序叙述。使用恰当的衔接手法，从描述交通事故分布到阐述原因过渡自然。
格式与语域 夹叙夹议文。
目标读者 读者能知道1997年交通事故分布的大致情况并了解作者的观点。
范文如下：
part A
Dear Helen,
I have read the advertisement and I would be very glad to become your pen-friend.
I am a girl of 24. I live with my parents in Beijing. I have a brother who is a computer programmer. I graduated from college two years ago and have been working at the hospital since then. I share the same interests with you. I am also fond of stamp collecting and language learning.
I really want to make more friends, not only in Beijing, in China, but also in other countries. It' s exciting to
know different cultures and customs.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
Part B
From the graph, we can see that there were two peaks of accidents in 1997. One was in March with the number of 35. The other was in August with the number of 42, which was the highest point of the distribution line. From Ate- gust on, the number of car accidents had been decreasing till it reached the lowest point of the year in December.
There were several possible reasons for the distribution of car accidents. First, weather might have played an important role. Two peaks occurred in spring and summer, the two seasons which had most of the year' s rain. Driv-ing tends to be more dangerous in rainy days. Second, people might have been alerted by the high number of acci- dents in Autumn, hence less and less accidents in later months.
四、各档学生样文及同步点评
1.Part A学生样文及同步点评
考生A
Dear Helen,
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement.
I am a girl of the same age with you. And I come from a happy and warm family, which includes my father, my mother, my sister and I. I love my family and they love me too. I am working in a factory far away from my hom town, but I am not regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collection and I have already collected more than three thousand stamps. I also like swimming, playing tennis and some other sports.
I wish that one day we could be good friends.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
同步点评
内容 内容切题，覆盖所有信息。
准确性 语言准确，有个别语法错误，如I am not regretted for my own choice。
多样性 使用较丰富的词汇及表达方式，如challengin9;in response t0。
连贯性 内容连贯，开头和结尾恰当。
格式和语域 作为一封私人信函，格式正确，语气友好。
目标读者 读者能对作者的生活有一全面、清晰的了解。
档次 第五档
考生B
Helen Young,
Having known that you are looking for pen-friends. I can't wait to write to you.
I just graduated from university. I am Cantonese, but I am now working for a company in Xi' an. I am the only
child in my family. My father is a businessman and my mother is a doctor. I like to play volleyball, football and bas-
ketball. Traveling is my another hobby. I have been many place in China such as Hangzhou, Ningbo and Shanghai.
Let's keep in touch, OK?
Yours,
Wang Lin
内容 内容切题，覆盖所有信息。
准确性 语言基本准确，有一些语法错误，如I have been many place in China。
多样性 用词和语法结构有一些变化，个别表达方式较好，如keep in touch。
连贯性 内容较连贯，衔接自然。
格式与语域 格式与语域较恰当，但信的开头应称呼Dear Helen而不是Helen Youn9。
目标读者 读者能对作者的生活有较全面的了解。
档次 第四档
考生C
Mrs Young,
I've read your advertisement in a magazine. I want to be pen-friends with you.
My name is Wang Lin. I am living in a traditional Chinese family. My father is a bus-driver. My mother is a worker, and my sister is a nurse. They are working hard.
Now I' m studying in the Shanghai University. My school is very beautiful. I also learned a lot of in this school. So, I like it.
My hobbies are the same to you. I also like play tennis.
I am waiting for your answer.
Yours,
Wang Lin
内容 包括大部分信息点，但内容略嫌简略。
准确性 有一些基本错误，如I am living in a traditional Chinese family;I also learned a lot of in this school;I also like play tennis。
多样性 对不同语法结构与词汇的使用达到基本要求。
连贯性 分段恰当，层次清晰。
格式与语域 格式与语域基本恰当，但信的开头应称呼Dear Helen而不是Mrs Young。
目标读者 读者能对作者的生活有一些了解。
档次 第三档
考生D
From the graph of the distribution of car accidents, we can see that there is a clear trend. There are two acmes,one is in March, and another is in August. There are relatively fewer accidents after September. What are the reasons for the uneven distribution of car accidents in the year?
In March and August, the weather is terrible. In March, there is too much rain, so the roads are wet. In August, it is very hot. It makes the drivers more careless than usually. While in January, May and December, theweather is good for the drivers. It is the most possible reason for it.
All in all, the authority should pay more attention to the car accidents in March and August.
内容内容切题，但对交通事故全年分布原因分析不够充分。
准确性语言运用熟练，有个别地方欠准确，如It makes the drivers more care|ess than usually。
多样性使用较丰富的词汇及表达方式，如relatively;uneven。
连贯性结构紧凑，有效地采用了多种衔接手法，如From…we can see that…;While in
January…;All in all…
格式与语域恰当的格式和语域。
目标读者 读者能清楚地获悉交通事故分布情况，并理解作者的观点。
档次 第五档
考生E
During the first three months of 1997, the car accidents in the city are more and more. But in April and May,the number drops to the level of the beginning of the year. From May to August, the number of accidents rises sharp-ly and in August it reaches the peak. Fortunately, from August to December the number drops to the lowest level of the chart.
It seems that the general trend in 1997 is decreasing. Here are some possible reasons for the distribution of car accidents. March and August active months for people to go outing. And there are more cars in the street than other months and more accidents. During winter months people prefer to staying at home rather than going out. And that may reduce the possibility of an accident. Or maybe people are shocked by the numbers of August and pay more at- tention to droving
同步点评
内容 内容较具体，覆盖所有信息。
准确性 有一些语法和拼写错误，如March and August active months for people to go outing prefer to staying at home，但基本不妨碍理解。
多样性 试图使用较复杂的词汇和表达方式，如rises sharply;reaches the peak;reduce the possibility,shocked by。
连贯性 采用了一些衔接手法，如Fortunately…;It seems that…分段恰当。
格式与语域 恰当的格式和语域。
目标读者 读者能获得较充分的信息。
档次 第四档
考生F
In our city, the number of car accidents is not same in different months. From January to February because it is very cold, a few cars are driven, so the number of car accidents is below 30. In spring, plenty of people are out of home and play, so the number of car accidents is risen and reach 35. In May, people are busy with works, so the number of car accidents is decreased to 25. From June to October, it is good time for people to play and drive their cars to visit or interests. Because it is full of rain during this time, the road is very smooth, so the number of acci-
dents is reach the high -- 40. In winter with action of people is reduced, the number of accidents is decreased.
内容基本完成试题规定的任务，覆盖多数内容要点。
准确性有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，如the number of car accidents is risen drive their cars to visit or interests;…is reach the high，但基本不影响理解。
多样性应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
连贯性作者未能有条理地分析图表及阐述观点，文章未使用恰当的衔接手法。
格式与语域格式和语域恰当。
目标读者对作者的观点有一些了解。