2012年6月英语四级作文真题+范文

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现在的英语越来越普及,随着英语的不断深入,英语作文变得越来越重要,下列是一些英语作文供大家参考。

所考话题为大学生熟悉的非社会热点话题:商品过度包装。

题目:On Excessive Packaging

提纲:1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象

2. 出现这一现象的原因

3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议

简易范文如下:(所使用表达均为新东方课堂要大家背诵的内容)

首段:现象描述

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for many products or items to be excessively packaged. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of customers find it more expensive to purchase these goods. Taking a look around, we can find a great many examples in supermarkets: excessive packages of food, clothes and gifts.

当今社会,商品往往被过度包装。同时,越来越多顾客发现这些商品更贵了。看看我们周围,可以发现超市中就有很多这样的例子:食品,服饰和礼物都存在过度包装。

二段:原因分析(这个的写作思路,专门强调过,见考前最后作文第二篇)

It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, some customers' psychological need is the root cause. These packages bring the sense of beauty, arouse people's enthusiasm to buy, and help manufacturers to promote sale. In the second place, it is these packages that enable shops to build up a foundation for advertising. As a matter of fact, industries in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of packaging for sale.

显然,该现象原因是多方面的。首先,顾客的心理需求是本质原因。这些包装给顾客带来美感,激发他们购买的热情,帮助了商家提升销量。此外,也正是这些包装使商店能给商品的宣传广告。

尾段:观点+建议

However, as a customer, I am convinced that quality of goods is of great importance. Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to buy goods without excessive packages. (170 words)

然而,作为顾客,我坚信商品质量是重要的。因此,我们应该教育,倡导和鼓励我们的同学,朋友和熟人们去购买不过度包装的商品。

On Excessive Packaging

I assume that you are familiar with the phenomenon of “Excessive Pack

aging”. Taking a look around,we can find examples with ease:a small computer is packed in a thick and heavycarton,clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bagsand moon-cakes are usually placed in delicate boxes。

What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, to earn more economic gains, a considerable number of manufactures usually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing

materials aiming at attracting customer’s attention , arousing their curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire. On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more delicate the package seems,the superior the quality will be,the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging。

To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction onexcessive packaging. Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse customers' consciousness that packaging doesn't equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend. (185words)

中文译文:

我觉得你应该对"商品过度包装"现象也不陌生。在我们生活的周围,我们随处可见这样的例子:小电脑包装在一个又厚又重的纸板盒里,衣服包装在设计精美的塑料袋里,月饼通常也放在精致的包装盒里。

这个问题的原因到底是什么? 首先,很多制造商为了获得更多的经济利益,通常都将商品用不必要却吸引人的包装里,目的在于吸引顾客的注意力,唤起他们的好奇心然后刺激他们的消费欲望。另一方面,相当多的顾客认为,包装越精致,产品的质量就越高,这个想法也加剧的了商品过度包装的趋势。

为了改变这个现状,我认为应该采取以下的措施,首先,必须制定是执行相关的法律限制商品过度包装;其次,我们应该开展广泛的教育运动唤起人们的意识,那就是,包装不等于产品质量。只有这样我们才能杜绝这种趋势。

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few。

There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging。

In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill。

To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.

【解析】

本次作文的话题是“过度包装”,话题不断新,考生应该都比较熟悉。写好本篇作文的关键在于紧跟题目所列提纲:现象——原因——看法和建议,确定相应的写作结构。重点分析产生此现象的原因有哪些,把最重要的两三点罗列下来。最后,根据分析出的原因提供相应的建议。

范文首段开门见山,首先一句话总结如今社会上过度包装现象盛行,而后举出一些实例补充说明。

第二段重点从公司和消费者两方面论述产生过度包装的原因。公司方面是为了吸引顾客,刺激消费,赢取更多的利润;消费者方面是认为包装越精美,质量越好这种错误的消费意识。

接下来作者表明自己的看法,认为过度包装会导致很多问题:稀缺资源的流失;水,能源的过度消耗以及产生不必要的垃圾场等。

最后一段作者针对原因提出了一些解决方案。第一方面,建立法律规章制度来约束企业的过度包装行为。第二方面,必须让消费者认识到过度包装不等同于高质量,并提倡包装物的回收利用。

本文条理清晰,论述充分,语言使用规范得当,如:to name but a few,the first reason is that…,on the other hand,in my point of view,to solve the problem,first,in addition等。

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