英语四级作文指导及范文

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③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.

写成3段的首段写法:

With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard,

more and more people can own private cars.

cars are entering ordinary families.

the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)

支持段的主题句:

Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.

There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.

支持段的分论点:

① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.

② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.

③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.

否定段的主题句:① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.

② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.

③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects

④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.

⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.

⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......

⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.

⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.

否定段的分论点:

① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.

② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.

③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.

注意:所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的,就是比较superordinate的词;而下义词就是具体的东西,即subordinate的东西。