英语四级作文指导及范文

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注:第一句应该用there be结构

Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.

I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.

I、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)

实例二 99年6月真题

Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:

(启)Paragraph I:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; (2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Score: 14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)

注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:

(承)Paragraph II:(1)提出一种观点或优点;(2)本段的支持性分论点;(3)本段总结(可以省略)。

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)

注:1. 本段总分总结构

2. they argue that = they think that

3. with the development of... 随着……的发展

4. what's more 递进关系,moreover

5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(转)Paragraph III:(1)承上启下的过渡句; (2)提出另一种观点或缺点;(3)本段的支持性分论点(4)本段总(可以省略)。