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2013四级写作点评
题目：On Excessive Packaging
提纲：1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
简易范文如下：(所使用表达均为新东方课堂要大家背诵的内容)
首段：现象描述
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for many products or items to be excessively packaged. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of customers find it more expensive to purchase these goods. Taking a look around, we can find a great many examples in supermarkets: excessive packages of food, clothes and gifts.
当今社会，商品往往被过度包装。同时，越来越多顾客发现这些商品更贵了。看看我们周围，可以发现超市中就有很多这样的例子:食品，服饰和礼物都存在过度包装。
二段：原因分析(这个的写作思路，专门强调过，见考前最后作文第二篇)
It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, some customers' psychological need is the root cause. These packages bring the sense of beauty, arouse people's enthusiasm to buy, and help manufacturers to promote sale. In the second place, it is these packages that enable shops to build up a foundation for advertising. As a matter of fact, industries in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of packaging for sale.
显然，该现象原因是多方面的。首先，顾客的心理需求是本质原因。这些包装给顾客带来美感，激发他们购买的热情，帮助了商家提升销量。此外，也正是这些包装使商店能给商品的宣传广告。
尾段：观点+建议
However, as a customer, I am convinced that quality of goods is of great importance. Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to buy goods without excessive packages. (170 words)
然而，作为顾客，我坚信商品质量是重要的。因此，我们应该教育，倡导和鼓励我们的同学，朋友和熟人们去购买不过度包装的商品。
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