句子成分残缺不全

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语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。

1.句子成分残缺不全

Wealwaysworkingtilllateatnightbeforetakingexams.(误)

Wearealwaysworking/Wealwaysworktilllateatnightbeforetakingexams(正)

Weshouldreadbooksmaybeusefultous.(误)

Weshouldreadbookswhichmaybeusefultous.(正)

2.句子成分多余

Thistestisend,butthereisanothertestiswaitingforyou.(误)

Onetestends,butanotheriswaitingforyou.(正)

Thedriveroftheredcarwasdiedonthespot.(误)

Thedriveroftheredcardiedonthespot.(正)

3.主谓不一致

Someone/Somebodythinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(误)

Somethinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(正)

Mysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(误)

Mysistergoestothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(正)

4.动词时态、语态的误用

Iwaswalkingalongtheroad,andtherearenotsomanycarsonthestreet.(误)

Iwaswalkingalongtheroadandtherewerenotsomanyvehiclesonthestreet.(正)

Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebookswhichweinterest.(误)

Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebooksinwhichweareinterested.(正)

Iamastudentwhohasstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears.(误)

Ihavebeenstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears(正)

5.词类混淆

Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.(误)

Inmyopinion,readingmustbeselective.(正)

Honestissoimportantforeveryperson.(误)

Honestyissoimportantforeveryone.(正)

Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.(误)

Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.(正)

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