【编者按】在职法律硕士英语写作：成功
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What Is Success? Your composition must be based on the information given in the outline below.
Outline:
1. Different opinions on success
2. Ways to achieve success
3. My view on success
范文
Success(成功)
What is success? Different people hold views on this question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different opinions on success.
In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverant and hardworking. You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other.
In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one’s work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people.
结构规律：开头以特殊疑问句开头引出话题;第二段论证话题;结尾发表自己观点。
结构亮点：
1.Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. That 引导宾语从句。本句译为：一些人认为如果这个人赚很多钱，就意味着成功。
2. In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverant and hardworking.. 为了获得成功，你首先应该具备持之以恒和勤奋。