案例分析

这是一篇典型的体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法)，自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优、缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。

根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界限，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。

高分范文

The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

Some are in favor of staying at home.They think it’s both convenient and comfortable.What’s more，they can save money for other purposes.But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons.But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework.

针对训练

近年来，禽流感频发，一些国家在疫区大肆捕杀鸟类。对此，你们班召开了主题班会，讨论结果如下：

赞成捕杀者认为

反对捕杀者认为

你的态度

1.防止病毒扩散、威胁人类健康

1.捕杀鸟类，不公平，太残忍

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2.疫区扩大，不容易控制

2.应尽快找到疫苗

注意：1.为使行文流畅，应适当增加细节，不能逐条翻译;

2.词数：120左右;

3.参考词汇：禽流感bird flu;家禽poultry;病毒virus;疫苗vaccine。

【参考答案】

In recent years，bird flu has frequently broken out in many countries and some of them have killed birds on a large scale in affected areas.In view of this action，our class have held a meeting to have a discussion about whether to kill them or not.

Some think it is necessary to kill all the birds.At present it is a good way to prevent the deadly virus from spreading and harming people’s health.The more the virus spreads to，the more difficult it is to conquer.However，others think it is unfair and awfully cruel to do so just for the benefit of human beings.Finding the vaccine as soon as possible is the most important thing.

As far as I’m concerned，catching and killing birds is not necessary.It may cause the birds to die out.After all，birds are friends to us human beings.

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