下面是2002年全国高考试题中的短文改错题。这道题较全面地反映了本文的口诀。现在请你试着做一做，然后参阅题后的答案与简析。

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows，it’s famous 76. _____

Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____

Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____

the mountain，the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____

climbed the mountain，we ed monkeys，visiting temples 80. _____

and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____

since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____

of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____

good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____

head touched the pillow.

答案与简析：

76. famous前加上a.(名词数)

77. 正确

78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。(句子成分多分析)

79. them→us (逻辑错误须关注)

80. visiting→visited(非谓动词细辨别)

81. picture→pictures(名词数)

82. passes→passed(动词形)

83. 去掉down(习惯用法要记住)

84. and→but(but，and，or和so)

85. 去掉at(句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住)