Dear Editor，

I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death.

As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,  we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged with law. Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

Yours,

Wang Ming

【答案】　1.第2句neighbor→neighbors　2.第2句buying→bought　3.第3句turn→turned　4.第4句去掉on

5.第6句only前加are　6.第6句we→they　7.第6句which→what　8.第7句with→by　9.第8句whole前加the / our    10.第8句important→importance

Ⅴ.书面表达

假如你是某电视台“科技博览”节目的编辑，  每周你们栏目要向观众介绍一项科技发明。这一期要向观众简要介绍手机。请你为栏目主持人准备一篇英文稿。

文稿内容必须包括：

1.手机被视为大发明的原因;

2.现今手机的功能;

3.你认为未来的手机会……

注意：1.短文的开头已为你写好，  不计入总词数;

2.词数100左右。

This is Science and Technology View of our TV station. We are now on the air with a 45-minute regular program to bring you a big invention—cell phones.

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One possible version：

This is Science and Technology View of our TV station. We are now on the air with a 45-minute regular program to bring you a big invention—cell phones.

Nowadays you can find a cell phone used here and there. Many people consider it one of the greatest inventions of the last century. Why? It has changed our way of life and speed the pace of our work. Also, it is a way to have fun and be cool.

Modern cell phones are more than just phones—they are being used as cameras and radios, and to send e-mails or surf the Internet. New functions are being added to the phones.It's believed that cell phones in the future will still play an important part in people's life. They will be much more smarter, and prices will be more competitive.

书面表达指导

提纲式写作模板

一、反映问题并提出意见

随着经济的发展，环境污染越来越严重，自然灾害接连不断地发生，严重威胁着人们的生活。对此，我们能做些什么以减轻对地球的污染呢?根据下列提示写一篇100词左右的英语作文。

内容包括：

1.公众应该接受环保教育，节电节水;

2.用环保购物袋取代塑料袋;

3.必须通过新的法律，控制工业污染问题。

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One possible version：

With the development of economy, our environment is being polluted more and more heavily. Natural disasters continuously broke out, threatening human life seriously. To_make_the_earth_a_better_place_for_us_to_live_on,_in my opinion, we should do as follows：

First of all, the public must receive the education about protecting environment. They should also save electricity and water in daily life. Besides, we should use environment-friendly shopping bags instead_of plastic bags, which will lead to the “white pollution”. More importantly, new laws must be passed to effectively control industrial pollution, which is the main cause of environmental pollution.

Only in this way can we have a more beautiful earth.

二、关于问题的正反意见

随着电脑和因特网的普及，网上购物也进入了人们的日常生活，有人支持网上购物，也有人对其持保留态度，你的看法是什么?根据下列提示写一篇100词左右的文章。

支持者：

1.节省时间、精力，对忙碌的人、老年人或一些不方便的人更是如此;

2.网上有大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的东西。

反对者：

1.网上所见的商品有可能与实物不一致，质量难以保证;

2.网上欺诈造成投诉困难。

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One possible version：

Online shopping is common in our daily life now. There are two kinds of opinions about it.

Some people hold the idea that online shopping has a lot of advantages. The most important one is its convenience. Online shopping saves time and energy for people, especially for the busy ones, the aged and the disabled who can't go to shops in person.Besides, on the Internet there is enough information of all kinds of goods, which_enables_people_to buy things from a distant place.

However, other people object to online shopping. They think the real goods may be different from what the consumers have seen on the Internet, thus the quality of goods bought online may not be ensured. What's worse, once_cheated_online, one may find_it_difficult_to make a complaint.

In my opinion, it is better for all to be careful when shopping online.